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Leesa · 8th Apr 04

inspired by brandons topic, heres some of my poem/song bits

suddenly I hate looking you in the eyes
bringing up this love to a bitter despise
I said I'd never repeat what I did back before
I promised I wouldnt turn around and beg for more
but shattered promises is what I am
so to save us both I'm running away as far as I can

*

this is the endless love ballad of our lives
this is the love story in which we strive
we have all the trust within each other
we have all the lust between each other
but these are the tears I cry
these are the fears I run to hide

*

look into my eyes
say to me what you're thinking, but don't say a goodbye
hold me just a bit longer, don't tell me that you wonder
if we're meant to be this way, are you really to stay
kiss me gently, take me for a ride in your bently
just don't walk out that door tonight
don't leave me in tears after another fight

*

this isn't a thank you you made me stonger
but a fuck you for makin me want to stay longer

that's all for the moment

Nikki · 8th Apr 04

Quote:

Originally Posted by Leesa

this is the endless love ballad of our lives
this is the love story in which we strive
we have all the trust within each other
we have all the lust between each other
but these are the tears I cry
these are the fears I run to hide

The entire thing was absolutely amazing, but this is my favourite stanza

Keep it coming

Erica · 8th Apr 04

I agree with nikki. it's really good.

IndustrialWaste · 11th Apr 04

I agree with everyone. leesa that stuff rocks! keep it coming! I feel so honoured being someone's inspiration! *steals leesa's poems*

Nikki · 11th Apr 04

Oi! Don't steal cause she'll hunt you down + steal your ass

IndustrialWaste · 11th Apr 04

oooooooooo I'll have her do that anyday! hahhaha well all my songs were stolen! what about those? huh?!

Nikki · 11th Apr 04

I'll let you off then, but only cause you have Blink lyrics in your siggy

IndustrialWaste · 11th Apr 04

gracias senorita!

INKY · 12th Apr 04

All I can come up with is Rorses are red, Violets are blue, if you try to kiss me I'll slap you.

Leesa · 14th Apr 04

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nikki

Oi! Don't steal cause she'll hunt you down + steal your ass

no! bad nikki!! I don't steal ass! I steal dildos, remember! :: holds your nikki's other dildo that I stole to face and pats it ::

8th Apr 04	#1
Leesa is blood thirsty. Join Date: 22nd Mar 03 Location: Sydney Age: 19 Posts: 8,135	inspired by brandons topic, heres some of my poem/song bits suddenly I hate looking you in the eyes bringing up this love to a bitter despise I said I'd never repeat what I did back before I promised I wouldnt turn around and beg for more but shattered promises is what I am so to save us both I'm running away as far as I can * this is the endless love ballad of our lives this is the love story in which we strive we have all the trust within each other we have all the lust between each other but these are the tears I cry these are the fears I run to hide * look into my eyes say to me what you're thinking, but don't say a goodbye hold me just a bit longer, don't tell me that you wonder if we're meant to be this way, are you really to stay kiss me gently, take me for a ride in your bently just don't walk out that door tonight don't leave me in tears after another fight * this isn't a thank you you made me stonger but a fuck you for makin me want to stay longer that's all for the moment __________________ Old skool Furtado represent. www.last.fm/user/angryprincess

8th Apr 04	#3
Erica shake it like a sugashaka Join Date: 7th Jul 03 Location: carribbian Age: 26 Posts: 5,078	I agree with nikki. it's really good. __________________ I want to live where soul meets body.And let the sun wrap its arms around me.

11th Apr 04	#4
IndustrialWaste Tell me I'm pretty! Join Date: 30th Jun 03 Location: VODKA! Age: 21 Posts: 1,338	I agree with everyone. leesa that stuff rocks! keep it coming! I feel so honoured being someone's inspiration! steals leesa's poems __________________ "Yowza - you're one hot piece of emo ass." - Miss Nikkay <3

11th Apr 04	#5
Nikki Old-skool 4 lyfe. <3 Join Date: 7th Nov 02 Location: Bayside. Age: 23 Posts: 16,682	Oi! Don't steal cause she'll hunt you down + steal your ass __________________ Make me a mixtape that makes me yours; don't leave out Husker Du, put something on that The Cars did in 1982. It makes me yours.

11th Apr 04	#6
IndustrialWaste Tell me I'm pretty! Join Date: 30th Jun 03 Location: VODKA! Age: 21 Posts: 1,338	oooooooooo I'll have her do that anyday! hahhaha well all my songs were stolen! what about those? huh?! __________________ "Yowza - you're one hot piece of emo ass." - Miss Nikkay <3

11th Apr 04	#8
IndustrialWaste Tell me I'm pretty! Join Date: 30th Jun 03 Location: VODKA! Age: 21 Posts: 1,338	gracias senorita! __________________ "Yowza - you're one hot piece of emo ass." - Miss Nikkay <3

12th Apr 04	#9
INKY Gold Member Join Date: 12th Feb 03 Location: Melbourne Victoria Australia Posts: 4,159	All I can come up with is Rorses are red, Violets are blue, if you try to kiss me I'll slap you. __________________ We all know when you make an assumption, you make an ass out of "U" and "Mption".

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