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Old 26th Mar 04   #1
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[Verse 1]
You
You just sit there looking as good as you do
You make me jealous every chance I get
Because I know
You turn your head away from me

[Chorus]
I'll never have you
I'll never have you
I do what I do
I feel what I feel
I'll never have you
I'll never have you
I say what I say
And I know what I want
You'll never know

[Verse 2]
I
I was lucky it began like it did
Not some
Stupid thing to waste time on
You might catch a clue sometime
But by then
It may already be too late

[Bridge]
And even if
I told you how I feel
Would you still like me
Would you still talk to me
Would you ignore me
And avoid me
Hand me over to a shameful fate
Persecute the ground I walk on
Persecute me
I'm dependant
Dependant on an empty want
That you won't satisfy me with
And you don't even know it

[Chorus]


ahhh the wonders of history class! I felt like making a fado-type song, something along the lines of Scared Of You, and I think it turned out alright. I usually try to avoid doing kinda depressing stuff but it auctually felt good to embrace that. I kinda dragged the bridge on for forever though.

shhhhhhh. can you hear that? that's the sound of poetry getting more and more dark, and if you listen close enough, you just might hear the call of the wild animal know as...brandon!!!
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that's good brandon. I can almost hear the music it goes with it. nice. it's really catchy kina. right on!
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Fado? Aye? I like it, so I don't mean this as an insult, but it reminds me of a kinda New Found Glory kinda thing, which is cool to me
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yah, I'm kinda finding myself drifting into catchy rock-punk songs and that's probaby because I'm listening to less and less hip hop and rap right now, but I guess it's just what comes naturally, so I go with it hehehehe

New Found Glory rocks!
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Wow That's Beautiful!!!
It Describes Execly(?) How I Feel Right Now About Someone!!!
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dude you
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thanks for all your positive feedback everyone! and I'm glad I could reach so many people through it! thanks everyone!
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if you ever put them songs on tape I would love to hear them...



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