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Tell me I'm pretty!
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You You just sit there looking as good as you do You make me jealous every chance I get Because I know You turn your head away from me [Chorus] I'll never have you I'll never have you I do what I do I feel what I feel I'll never have you I'll never have you I say what I say And I know what I want You'll never know [Verse 2] I I was lucky it began like it did Not some Stupid thing to waste time on You might catch a clue sometime But by then It may already be too late [Bridge] And even if I told you how I feel Would you still like me Would you still talk to me Would you ignore me And avoid me Hand me over to a shameful fate Persecute the ground I walk on Persecute me I'm dependant Dependant on an empty want That you won't satisfy me with And you don't even know it [Chorus] ahhh the wonders of history class! I felt like making a fado-type song, something along the lines of Scared Of You, and I think it turned out alright. I usually try to avoid doing kinda depressing stuff but it auctually felt good to embrace that. I kinda dragged the bridge on for forever though. shhhhhhh. can you hear that? that's the sound of poetry getting more and more dark, and if you listen close enough, you just might hear the call of the wild animal know as...brandon!!!
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shake it like a sugashaka
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that's good brandon. I can almost hear the music it goes with it. nice. it's really catchy kina. right on!
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Tell me I'm pretty!
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thanks erica!
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Old-skool 4 lyfe. <3
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Fado? Aye? I like it, so I don't mean this as an insult, but it reminds me of a kinda New Found Glory kinda thing, which is cool to me
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Tell me I'm pretty!
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yah, I'm kinda finding myself drifting into catchy rock-punk songs and that's probaby because I'm listening to less and less hip hop and rap right now, but I guess it's just what comes naturally, so I go with it hehehehe
New Found Glory rocks!
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Wow That's Beautiful!!!
It Describes Execly(?) How I Feel Right Now About Someone!!!
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awesome
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dude you
keep it up man... nelly
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Tell me I'm pretty!
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thanks for all your positive feedback everyone! and I'm glad I could reach so many people through it! thanks everyone!
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if you ever put them songs on tape I would love to hear them...
nelly
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