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Old 18th Apr 04   #1
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Forbidden Fruit

This love is volatile, but never so violent
Tussling on the floor was never innocent
The way you move beneath me, makes me want you to catch my breath
The way you push your hips into me, I wanna give 'til there's nothing left

I don't know what I'm trynna say to you
All I know is that I can't live without you
Your aura breaths me in + it spits me out
I'm on the ceiling, kicking, hear me shout
"You could be the one if you'd only let me in
I could be the one, let me be your anything"

You tell me "I know you like to tease"
You sucker me in + then you leave
Frustration was always the main issue right here
Your hand on my wrist + your voice in my ear
Scratches on my back + gasps in the air
Everytime I feel you, you're never there

You move so slowly + I know this time, I'll give in
You brush up next to me, acting so coy, just cave in
Holding my hand as you lead me astray, your stomach so taut
You skin tastes like heaven, salty yet sweet,
I pray we don't get caught

I don't know what I'm trynna say to you
All I know is that I can't live without you
Your aura breaths me in + it spits me out
I'm on the ceiling, kicking, hear me shout
"You could be the one if you'd only let me in
I could be the one, let me be your anything"

Steamed up bathroom mirrors + frenzied rendezvous
This time is the last time, I say, everytime, I want you
How long will I have to wait just to say goodnight?
How long will I have to wait just to make up this time?

I don't know what I'm trynna say to you
All I know is that I can't live without you
Your aura breaths me in + it spits me out
I'm on the ceiling, kicking, hear me shout
"You could be the one if you'd only let me in
I could be the one, let me be your anything"
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Old 19th Apr 04   #2
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well, as always you have a way with the words
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Ta, toots
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How very sexy and senatual.
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That wasn't really my aim when I wrote it, the aim was just to try to portray how easy it is just to get caught up in the physical side of things, but it didn't really come off like that
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Yeah sex is good, but it's better when theres love.
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I don't know what I'm trynna say to you
All I know is that I can't live without you
Your aura breaths me in + it spits me out
I'm on the ceiling, kicking, hear me shout
"You could be the one if you'd only let me in
I could be the one, let me be your anything"
I didn't say that there wasn't emotion there, this bit suggests emotion to me *shrug* maybe it just didn't come off right, anyway the whole point is that it was maybe striving to be more than just physical, but extenuating circumstances prevented that, hence the title + the implication that it was wrong, the "pray we don't get caught" line I don't really know, I'm not entirely happy with it, yet, I just wanted opinions
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"pray we don't get caught"
Reminds me of that one time............
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The way you push your hips into me, I wanna give 'til there's nothing left
Yeah baby, YEAH!
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Becs, I never knew you felt that way...... j/k
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