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Old 8th Mar 04   #1
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The Heartless Sleeve


As I was enjoying the beautiful things of life, I saw someone standing there. he began walking up to me, taking interest in everything thst I did. he whispered sweet loving words in my ear. I looked up at him with love and compassion. thinking that I finally found that person I had been searching for.as I was thinking this, his hand that I was holding slipped. I looked up at him again,he smiled kissed me on the cheek and let go of my hand. I was not noticing this for I was concentrating on how happy I was at that moment. time after time, the love we shared was fading and I felt him slip away from my grasp. a part of me felt that it got torn away. the pain I felt hurt so badly. something, I thought, was missing from me. I felt so much pain as he then dissappeared into thin air, without giving me the chance to say anything. I found myself feeling wounded and alone. I kept expecting him to be there at every moment. but he never showed. I kept listening for his sweet words that he would whisper, but there was no sound. I kept trying to feel for his touch and his soft kisses,but nothing but my own sadness to feel. I realised then thaat he was no more and so I wept, noticing I gave away my heart that was on my sleeve.will I ever get it back again? I wondered. then I promised myself that I would never fall in love again.

I'm not sure if it's a poem or a story...but I wrote it last night.
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wow erica. that's really touching. I really liked it, keep it up!
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awwww!, that's really good writing... yet sad
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Y'hear that sound? That's the sound of my heart breaking over your work
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erics wot can I say......
''very touching''


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It is a very nice piece I really like it!, and yeah it is touching!
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OMG That Was Beautiful!!
I Feel You..
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thank you. but it's all true I think. as a matter of fact, neely says that in her shit on the radio song. I think. and it's true. you can't wear your heart on your sleeve, or everythime it will get broken. I know that from experience and I do it all the time. I'm trying not to, but it just happens. part of who I am I guess. but thanks everyone.
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That was so sweet to read. Great job Erica. =-)
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