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Tell me I'm pretty!
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Bunch of tissues on the floor Here I sit right by them I don't remember wanting more Why did you hit me? Will I ever know? I can't remember all that much Because of the bloodflow [Chorus] All the tissues on the floor Don't do that much Cause I'm knocked out By the bloody nose I got From the last time you hit me [Verse 2] I just stood there Let you hit me I never really asked you to You used your famous line Your ruse And hit me as hard as you could [Chorus] [Bridge] Bloody nose, bloody nose How much do I love thee? Can you guess? I think you know From the one that gave you to me [Chorus] Inspired by a true story! heeeeeeee I auctually wanted to make this one comical and I think it turned out pretty well. but it feels like it's not as deep as my other songs. oh well, being shallow pays off
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Old-skool 4 lyfe. <3
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Actually, dood, that one actually got me more than the others, I didn't find it comical, I thought it was way harsh, but in a good way
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Tell me I'm pretty!
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yah I guess it could go both ways. It could be a really sad song, or it could be slightly comical. But yah, there's a seriousness there. alright, now that you made me think about it, I think I'll steer away from that whole comical thing and go more serious, I think it works better with the song.
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Old-skool 4 lyfe. <3
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Definetly, I mean, it just be my mind frame atm, but that's how I took it, I dunno, it could swing both ways, the music will clinch it
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Tell me I'm pretty!
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yah, the music will definatly decide whether it's more somber or comical. but by just reading it, I could see how you got that. whew, you saved my back nikki!
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Old-skool 4 lyfe. <3
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Glad to be of service.....
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Tell me I'm pretty!
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how much was that? *writes out check*
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