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Old 15th Apr 04   #1
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[Verse 1]
Bunch of tissues on the floor
Here I sit right by them
I don't remember wanting more
Why did you hit me?
Will I ever know?
I can't remember all that much
Because of the bloodflow

[Chorus]
All the tissues on the floor
Don't do that much
Cause I'm knocked out
By the bloody nose I got
From the last time you hit me

[Verse 2]
I just stood there
Let you hit me
I never really asked you to
You used your famous line
Your ruse
And hit me as hard as you could

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
Bloody nose, bloody nose
How much do I love thee?
Can you guess?
I think you know
From the one that gave you to me

[Chorus]

Inspired by a true story! heeeeeeee I auctually wanted to make this one comical and I think it turned out pretty well. but it feels like it's not as deep as my other songs. oh well, being shallow pays off
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Actually, dood, that one actually got me more than the others, I didn't find it comical, I thought it was way harsh, but in a good way
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yah I guess it could go both ways. It could be a really sad song, or it could be slightly comical. But yah, there's a seriousness there. alright, now that you made me think about it, I think I'll steer away from that whole comical thing and go more serious, I think it works better with the song.
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Definetly, I mean, it just be my mind frame atm, but that's how I took it, I dunno, it could swing both ways, the music will clinch it
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yah, the music will definatly decide whether it's more somber or comical. but by just reading it, I could see how you got that. whew, you saved my back nikki!
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how much was that? *writes out check*
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