I watched you leave..

[Leesa]

bit of a freestyle. I'm sad for two reasons really, other poem ill do now.

I watched you leave
walk straight out of my life
I looked up that day and realised
our destiny together is finalised
picking up the pieces of my missing life
all in shatters as this ending wasnt exactly nice
I can't cry I can only say goodbye
and bear such a happy smile, just for a little while
people asking questions
bare them off with brave words from my selection
but they don't know what I feel
and you don't know these wounds won't ever heal
won't you come back one day and tell me you love me again
hold me close and tell me our love will never end
my wrists can't take these pains
initals and wild slashes soon will I be slain
I hate all this hiding, all this forced to be fake
I want to smile again for you not just for my sake
but I'm not apart of your life anymore
that's it it's done you're out the door
you chose our fate together
after all the times you told me we were forever

[INKY]

Now that's really deep.

[Nikki]

F**k! *in awe* you amaze me, girl

[nellified]

wow. that is good, I'm impressed!!

[PJ:]

Very touching... thanx for posting and good luck

[Daisy]

that's really deep I can really compare with that one thanx for posting it