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Shorty · 27th Jan 04

Jealousy

Our Hearts Burning
Only Flames Of Jealousy Light Our Eyes
Trust Not Broken, But Soon To Be Set Ablaze
Our Jealous Hearts Are Spitting Embers
In Our Eyes Those Embers Show The Power Of Our Great Blaze
Our Love?s In Flames
All We Can Do Now Is Await The Smoke To Clear.

Torn

Everything Is Falling Apart
My Heart Lies Shattered And In Pieces On The Floor
Just Like All Those Notes You Gave Me
I'm Torn Apart By Words That You Have Said
No Reconciliations And No Regrets
With A Bullet Straight From Your Gun
My Heart Is Shot Down And Explodes
The Memories Are Cutting Me Deeper
Replaying The Recorded Words That I'd Forgotton
Time Is Slipping And Everything Moves In Slow Motion
I'm Numbed By The Fear And The Pain
Losing You Is Ripping Me Apart
Now My Life Is Lying Broken On My Blood Stained Floor.

neltado · 27th Jan 04

wow those are really good!

Shorty · 28th Jan 04

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Originally Posted by Shorty

In Our Eyes Those Embers Show The Power Or Our Great Blaze

that line is meant to be OF not OR.

Nikki · 29th Jan 04

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shorty

My Heart Lies Shattered And In Pieces On The Floor
Just Like All Those Notes You Gave Me

Fuck, Laney, you have an amazing gift! I loved Jealousy, but Torn is just wow, y'know? I just had to read it again + again, it's just so powerful + emotive, I can't explain it! Especially these two lines for some reason

Shorty · 29th Jan 04

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nikki

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shorty

My Heart Lies Shattered And In Pieces On The Floor
Just Like All Those Notes You Gave Me

Fuck, Laney, you have an amazing gift! I loved Jealousy, but Torn is just wow, y'know? I just had to read it again + again, it's just so powerful + emotive, I can't explain it! Especially these two lines for some reason

thanks

PJ: · 29th Jan 04

Very good indeed

Keep posting more of those

Daisy · 30th Jan 04

Ditto

Leesa · 4th Feb 04

girrrlll you know I love your writing tonnes!! it makes me cry heaps, you're talented and I love it and I love you! I love torn I can relate to it really strongly except the note part. but still, it's so awesome!

INKY · 4th Feb 04

That was very heart opening.

Rebecca · 6th Feb 04

deep.....as always.

27th Jan 04	#1
Shorty Its Me - Giraffe! Join Date: 16th Feb 02 Location: Scotland Age: 20 Posts: 2,176	Jealousy Our Hearts Burning Only Flames Of Jealousy Light Our Eyes Trust Not Broken, But Soon To Be Set Ablaze Our Jealous Hearts Are Spitting Embers In Our Eyes Those Embers Show The Power Of Our Great Blaze Our Love?s In Flames All We Can Do Now Is Await The Smoke To Clear. Torn Everything Is Falling Apart My Heart Lies Shattered And In Pieces On The Floor Just Like All Those Notes You Gave Me I'm Torn Apart By Words That You Have Said No Reconciliations And No Regrets With A Bullet Straight From Your Gun My Heart Is Shot Down And Explodes The Memories Are Cutting Me Deeper Replaying The Recorded Words That I'd Forgotton Time Is Slipping And Everything Moves In Slow Motion I'm Numbed By The Fear And The Pain Losing You Is Ripping Me Apart Now My Life Is Lying Broken On My Blood Stained Floor. __________________ ?* "Change is the most important element in life" - Nelly Furtado *?

27th Jan 04	#2
neltado Wiola <3 Join Date: 23rd Sep 02 Location: Estonia Age: 26 Posts: 5,887	wow those are really good! __________________ Embrace the colour in your life.

29th Jan 04	#6
PJ: Pedro JosÃ© Join Date: 29th Sep 03 Location: Lisbon Age: 26 Posts: 3,764	Very good indeed Keep posting more of those __________________ "If you want to change the world, change yourself." ???http://www.flickr.com/photos/pedrojose???

30th Jan 04	#7
Daisy Bounce Bounce Bounce Join Date: 15th Sep 03 Location: new zealand Age: 19 Posts: 918	Ditto __________________ I'm a part-time prophetess

4th Feb 04	#8
Leesa is blood thirsty. Join Date: 22nd Mar 03 Location: Sydney Age: 19 Posts: 8,134	girrrlll you know I love your writing tonnes!! it makes me cry heaps, you're talented and I love it and I love you! I love torn I can relate to it really strongly except the note part. but still, it's so awesome! __________________ Old skool Furtado represent. www.last.fm/user/angryprincess

4th Feb 04	#9
INKY Gold Member Join Date: 12th Feb 03 Location: Melbourne Victoria Australia Posts: 4,159	That was very heart opening. __________________ We all know when you make an assumption, you make an ass out of "U" and "Mption".

6th Feb 04	#10
Rebecca Platinum Member Join Date: 10th Aug 02 Location: Houston, TX Age: 71 Posts: 4,632	deep.....as always.

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