some parts of songs that I'm thinking about doing

[IndustrialWaste]

Once again I'm found alone
Broken by the stone you've thrown
You choose to leave me there you go
Now I have nothing left to show

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Well again I've fallen deep
Deeper than ever before
And you keep your hold on me
Hold me tight and love me more

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Come with me to where I live
Be yourself with me
There is no rush there is no race
Defiance is the place

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It's hard enough to tell you what
I feel on the inside I hide
Everyday how far I stray
Connects me more and more to you

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Ok, this one I was thinking about sampling my all time favourite neo-soul song from one of my favourite artists WOOHOO! MACY GRAY!!!! called "Do Something" and here's the original line from it that I want to sample "Cause you and I've got to do for you and I." it's the last line in the chorus. It's auctually pretty funny cause Macy did the same thing in her song by sampling Outkast's "Get Up, Get Out" and she scratched it at the beginning too. So it's kind of paying homage to her style of sampling songs and Outkast at the same time! weeeeeeeeeeeee

[Scratching]
Y - You an You an
You an - You and I
Y-Y-You an
You and I've got to do for you and I

[Verse 1]
It only seems a little while ago
You fell into my hands
And I had to let you know
I love the way you smile
I love the way you sing
I love the way you give it all
Without giving up anything

It's easy to dwell in your dreams
Because they are so swell

[Chorus]
We gotta get up get out and do something more about
What we can't fighure out
And rid ourselves of the doubt
Rid ourselves of the why
(Cause you and I've got to do for you and I)

annnnd that's all I came up with before quitting and realizing that it wasn't coming out as good as I thought it would. Ok, these are all fragments of songs that I either thought up and abandoned or are in the works right now.

Sooooo ummm tell me what ya think cause I'm todally lost right now. I haven't written a good song for a couple days now. I'm going through an artist's slump cause I've got a little cold *achooooo!*

and thanks for taking the time to read all of this! thank you thank you thank you! I'll take my grammy now!

[cheyenne]

I'm THE FIRST TO REPLLLYYY! *nails ALREADY READ
sign in brandood's yard of poems and such*
eheeheh YAYAYAYYYY they were soo goooosieeegoose!

[IndustrialWaste]

yeeeeeeeeeeee weeeee chey likes them, they MUST be good then *checks his butt* yup, she marked me it says "PROPERTY OF CHEYENNE"

wowzer!

[cheyenne]

ooo cool! I OWN ANOTHER LANDMARK! *marks "brandon's
ass" on list of things she owns*

there can be hoteeeeeeeels there!..or..or...an
AIRPORT!..or maybe a waterpark! YAY!

[IndustrialWaste]

weeeeeeee I have a major landmark. wait a sec. HEEEEEEEEEEY! well, at least my milkshake will bring all the boys to the yard. that's a major plus in my book!

[Erica]

awww brandon. that was so sweet! nice.

[IndustrialWaste]

hehehe I just read through it all and all of the parts in the beginning really sound good together, hmmmm maybe I should just put them together. nahhhhh they're all jumbled up thoughts, they wouldn't really work that well all in one song. It'd be sensory overload. Thanks Ewika!

[Leesa]

HEY, NICE STUFF!

[IndustrialWaste]

thanksssssss! weeeeeeeeee

[cheyenne]

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