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I wrote this two years ago I think . . . it's the one thing that I've written recently (semi-recently) that I haven't shunned and burned in the woods that don't exist here. Anyway, it's in Spanish but I'll write up a translation too (although I'm not sure how good it'll be in English):
"Fuego" Un rel?mpago rompe el cielo Sobre los ?rboles temblientes Pero t?, fuego, no te importa Contin?as a quemarte Contin?as a dar una luz Un poco de calor Para que puedan vivir los animales Para que pueda vivir yo Porque yo s? que siempre te quemar?s Te agotar?s jam?s Jam?s Porque sin ti, sin ti morir?a Necesito una luz para siempre Necesito calor para mi cuerpo fr?o No pensaba que pudieras apagarte Pero el cielo necesita llorar a veces Las l?grimas de Dios se caen sobre ti Poco a poco tu luz se quita la vida Porque no quieres vivir mezclado con l?grimas Con gotas de dolor y con el sufrimiento del rel?mpago ?Por qu? moriste as?? ?Por qu? te rendiste a las l?grimas del cielo? No pensaba que pudieras morir Y ahora no te quiero No te quiero "Fire" A lightning bolt breaks the sky Above the trembling trees But you, fire, you don?t care You continue to burn You continue to give a light A little bit of heat So that the animals can live So that I can live Because I know that you?ll always burn You will never go out Never Because without you, without you I would die I need a light forever I need heat for my cold body I didn?t think that you could burn out But the sky needs to cry sometimes The tears of God fall above you Little by little your light dies out Because you don?t want to live mixed with tears With drops of pain and with the suffering of the lightning bolt Why did you die like that? Why did you succumb to the tears of the sky? I didn?t think that you could die And now I don?t love you I don?t love you
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shake it like a sugashaka
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wow, that's intense. nice work!!
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thanks . . . haha I actually just basically wrote it around my favourite word in Spanish and then all of a sudden I was like, whoa, where did that come from?!
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