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Old 25th Jan 04   #1
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Ok, here's another one. Only this time, I decided to try making a rap-ish type song. And the title's only temporary.

I know you feel like cutting the corner.
Go ahead and cut it,
If it makes you feel in order.
Watch the border, it'll make you feel shorter.
But go ahead and cut your corner.
You better watch your back man
Before I rise up and take control
while you fall down the hole.
Are you sold?
Could you be sold?
And if you could you'd be left in the cold.
Another one to fit the mold.
Put your mind on hold for a second.
Not gonna settle for the one on the shelf.
Not gonna settle for temptation of wealth.
Watch yourself.
You're about to cross the line.
Try not to be disturbed at what you're gonna find.
Cause you'll see things are different on the other side.
Keep your head on.
Don't worry about tomorrow.
Worry about today.
Cause today is tomorrow's yesterday.


Kinda dumb I know, it's just basically a rap about nothing. I was just too concerned with trying to get it to rhyme I didn't bother trying to get it to make sense.
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I was just too concerned with trying to get it to rhyme I didn't bother trying to get it to make sense.
sounds like it's right up my alley..lol
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it has that "loose yourself" rythem to it. the one eminem did
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Don't put yourself down that's awesome and I was just having a quick browse I wasn't going to look through all the new creative writing pieces, but the title attracted me so I wouldn't change that either
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Don't put yourself down that's awesome and I was just having a quick browse I wasn't going to look through all the new creative writing pieces, but the title attracted me so I wouldn't change that either
You really think so? thanks! And thanks everyone for your positive feedback! YAY FOR ME!
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it has that "loose yourself" rythem to it. the one eminem did
Is that a good thing or bad thing? hehe jk
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haha, no man it actually was pretty good...
but not as good as Crispy!!!
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hahaha who's Crispy?
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that's really cool

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crispy is soo funny, I can't wait till he comes out with something new
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