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QuantumP7 · 3rd Apr 04

Yeah. Kind of a song/poem thing. Kinda long. I hope it makes enough sense. It isn't a suicide note or anything, by the way. heh

I don?t want to seem like I?m complaining
I just wonder when I?ll get someone to save me
Just some reassurance that love won?t pass me
Someone to open my eyes to finally see
What?s out there

Won?t someone save me
Is there a girl out there for me
I?m just one in a billion
God, did you forget about me
Was I born to live a life of loneliness
Of sadness and distress

I want someone I can treasure
Her mind, body and spirit forever
I could even settle for a best friend
Who I can talk to and let in
To share the universe and the stars
That wrote her in for me

Won?t someone save me
Is there a girl out there for me
I?m just one in a billion
God, did you forget about me
Was I born to live a life of loneliness
Of sadness and distress

I know I?m hard to reach
That?s from a life of lies and deceit
I wish someone would realise that
And reach out and help me realise that
Love is not something just written about
In those Hallmark cards and the television shows
And the couples kissing over by the groves

Won?t someone save me
Is there a girl out there for me
I?m just one in a billion
God, did you forget about me
Was I born to live a life of loneliness
Of sadness and distress

This isn?t a pity party, I swear
I just wanted to get this out of my head
I wish I could have someone to love
And give me a reason to keep living and loving

Rebecca · 3rd Apr 04

That was good! Really good! But is sounds like ur really lonely.

u don't have a title for it?

QuantumP7 · 3rd Apr 04

Actually, I don't have a title for it. I guess I didn't think I needed one, since I'm probably not gonna put this to music. Thanks for the compliment, though.

Nikki · 3rd Apr 04

That is so amazing, Tiff! It really touched me, sometimes we all get like that + you really captured it!

Leesa · 4th Apr 04

awww heeyyy girl that was so beautiful... :: huggs!!! ::
she'll come along one day, she'll be the most beautiful and she'll be just made for you

QuantumP7 · 5th Apr 04

Thanks, you all. *blushes*

Thanks for the encouragement, Leesa, but I've pretty much lost hope. Just tired of waiting, ya know?

Nikki · 5th Apr 04

She'll come, you have your whole life to find her, for now, just have fun!

Erica · 6th Apr 04

aww..that was beautiful. I kinda felt that way once. and I agree. I'm tired of waiting, or was...but right now, just want to concentrate on me. the time will come. youll see. nice work though.

QuantumP7 · 6th Apr 04

Thanks, you all!

AJCN · 20th Apr 04

WOW I'm so touch I felt lik tat once and stil do somtimes..but we'r all find som1 we jus hav 2stop lokin (if ya know wat I mean)

hugs from me I know how ya feel u should record it with music

peace

3rd Apr 04	#1
QuantumP7 Obsessed Nelly Fan Join Date: 21st Feb 04 Location: Tennessee, USA Age: 26 Posts: 764	Yeah. Kind of a song/poem thing. Kinda long. I hope it makes enough sense. It isn't a suicide note or anything, by the way. heh I don?t want to seem like I?m complaining I just wonder when I?ll get someone to save me Just some reassurance that love won?t pass me Someone to open my eyes to finally see What?s out there Won?t someone save me Is there a girl out there for me I?m just one in a billion God, did you forget about me Was I born to live a life of loneliness Of sadness and distress I want someone I can treasure Her mind, body and spirit forever I could even settle for a best friend Who I can talk to and let in To share the universe and the stars That wrote her in for me Won?t someone save me Is there a girl out there for me I?m just one in a billion God, did you forget about me Was I born to live a life of loneliness Of sadness and distress I know I?m hard to reach That?s from a life of lies and deceit I wish someone would realise that And reach out and help me realise that Love is not something just written about In those Hallmark cards and the television shows And the couples kissing over by the groves Won?t someone save me Is there a girl out there for me I?m just one in a billion God, did you forget about me Was I born to live a life of loneliness Of sadness and distress This isn?t a pity party, I swear I just wanted to get this out of my head I wish I could have someone to love And give me a reason to keep living and loving __________________ "It's a shame David Beckham wasn't in the crowd to volley the balls hard back at the dancers and knock them off the stage." -Ben Rawson-Jones

3rd Apr 04	#3
QuantumP7 Obsessed Nelly Fan Join Date: 21st Feb 04 Location: Tennessee, USA Age: 26 Posts: 764	Actually, I don't have a title for it. I guess I didn't think I needed one, since I'm probably not gonna put this to music. Thanks for the compliment, though. __________________ "It's a shame David Beckham wasn't in the crowd to volley the balls hard back at the dancers and knock them off the stage." -Ben Rawson-Jones

3rd Apr 04	#4
Nikki Old-skool 4 lyfe. <3 Join Date: 7th Nov 02 Location: Bayside. Age: 23 Posts: 16,682	That is so amazing, Tiff! It really touched me, sometimes we all get like that + you really captured it! __________________ Make me a mixtape that makes me yours; don't leave out Husker Du, put something on that The Cars did in 1982. It makes me yours.

4th Apr 04	#5
Leesa is blood thirsty. Join Date: 22nd Mar 03 Location: Sydney Age: 19 Posts: 8,130	awww heeyyy girl that was so beautiful... :: huggs!!! :: she'll come along one day, she'll be the most beautiful and she'll be just made for you __________________ Old skool Furtado represent. www.last.fm/user/angryprincess

5th Apr 04	#6
QuantumP7 Obsessed Nelly Fan Join Date: 21st Feb 04 Location: Tennessee, USA Age: 26 Posts: 764	Thanks, you all. blushes Thanks for the encouragement, Leesa, but I've pretty much lost hope. Just tired of waiting, ya know? __________________ "It's a shame David Beckham wasn't in the crowd to volley the balls hard back at the dancers and knock them off the stage." -Ben Rawson-Jones

3rd Apr 04	#2
Rebecca Platinum Member Join Date: 10th Aug 02 Location: Houston, TX Age: 71 Posts: 4,632	That was good! Really good! But is sounds like ur really lonely. u don't have a title for it?

6th Apr 04	#8
Erica shake it like a sugashaka Join Date: 7th Jul 03 Location: carribbian Age: 26 Posts: 5,078	aww..that was beautiful. I kinda felt that way once. and I agree. I'm tired of waiting, or was...but right now, just want to concentrate on me. the time will come. youll see. nice work though. __________________ I want to live where soul meets body.And let the sun wrap its arms around me.

6th Apr 04	#9
QuantumP7 Obsessed Nelly Fan Join Date: 21st Feb 04 Location: Tennessee, USA Age: 26 Posts: 764	Thanks, you all! __________________ "It's a shame David Beckham wasn't in the crowd to volley the balls hard back at the dancers and knock them off the stage." -Ben Rawson-Jones

20th Apr 04	#10
AJCN Palladium member Join Date: 12th Apr 04 Location: Inglaterra Age: 21 Posts: 3,119	WOW I'm so touch I felt lik tat once and stil do somtimes..but we'r all find som1 we jus hav 2stop lokin (if ya know wat I mean) hugs from me I know how ya feel u should record it with music peace __________________ myspace ... I got a facebook too.

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